I’m going to give just one criticism to it, and it’s not even necessarily one that has to be addressed by that chapter itself.
I started a new Mage and got a little thrown by how the game gives you the old intro for your character, and then the game thrusts you into your trek to the peace-talks. There’s a left by a traveler that supposedly asks for your aid in these peace-talks, but it’s not clear if it’s actually asking your character specifically to join or if it’s just, like, an invitation to no-one in particular.
The solution would involve re-doing the intro cutscene to make it more clear whether or not your character was aware of what was actually going on. I can’t remember if it was mentioned that those cutscenes are going to be re-done in the future or not, but I imagine it’s probably lower priority for patch content.