It looks fantastic! However, I would get rid of the "you" in the advanced alt descriptors.
- No mana regen when spinning
Instead of "You do have no mana regen when spinning" Following the same model:
- Cannot be stunned when spinning
It would then match the current " Not affected by weapon range"
Unless of course the "you" is used for programming and adds some interesting subtleties.
Sorry if I'm unclear, english isn't my native language.