over 3 years ago - Uncia - Direct link
Hi! Thank you for the report - though you may have slightly overplayed the seriousness of the issue. ;)

Either way, had a look at it and don't think that the problem is quite there (though I can see your interpretation) - it's essentially saying that once the scientist used the data to adjust the orbit and planetary position, the indicator beams were suddenly converging on another planet in the system.

That said, looking over the text I spotted two other grammatical issues that could need fixing, so have forwarded that (as well as your issue in case the writers disagree with me) internally for a text update.