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KissingAiur
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The only issue here that I am seeing is that “The Shamans came,” needs the comma removed.
Is there something else wrong with this particular line of text?
The only issue here that I am seeing is that “The Shamans came,” needs the comma removed.
Is there something else wrong with this particular line of text?
I’ll make a note of it.
Thanks.